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My eye got stabbed

Published 8 months ago • 1 min read

Ahhhhhhhh,

It hurt

Stop it Reader,

Ok, let me explain

I'm subscribed to hundreds of email lists because I'm an email marketer

And I opened this email and it burned my eyes

You can see what's wrong with it here

But here's how I would change it

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  1. Make the font white
  2. Use a CTV (call to value) instead of a CTA like: "Get your needed tools now" or "Fix your car"
  3. Instead of the bland 10$ off, I would use a percentage of
  4. Self explanatory

So, apply this to your copy...if you want sales

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Robert out

Ultimate Wisdom

I help people improving their finance, health & mindset

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